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Visiting This World Unknown

Well I am landed on this place looks different really quite strange read all about it but it's so different makes you wonder has it any range? People go about in a square thing moving with 4 round things on ground some go quite fast really dangerous think I'll just walk all around There seems little places as well as big lots of people are in big places together the climate is changeable so much got white and wet drops, called weather Some regions get loads of sun but others do get much less then some have long histories others short causing stress But they do some stupid things they believe in a big bang beginning when sense knows God is creator which is why this world isn't winning (This is an imaginary tale of myself coming to this earth for the first time haven't ever been before and discovering all that's here and wondering what is this? )

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Date: 12/15/2020 9:47:00 AM
Imagining landing on this planet in a hundred yeas from now, if between all continents and countries ill feeling still exists, everyone is still at war, and all continue barking at each other, I think it will only take two mad men to make Planet Earth go puuuuuf! One to press that red button and the other to retaliate! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Loved your poem Gordon!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/15/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Jenny, Glad you loved it and for your words of truth indeed if God was not in control where would be! Hope all is safe with you, I hear the beaches in SA are all closed too in your lockdown. We're ok but the holiday break at Christmas looks dangerous, blessings always,Gordon
Date: 12/10/2020 4:47:00 AM
Great words... F l o w i n g with I N S P I R A T I O N - God bless you
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/10/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Gina, Glad you enjoyed it and thought it was great.Hope all is well with you, blessings always,Gordon

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