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Violette So Sweet

Arousing affective Wistful retrospective Amorous perspective Sweet regression Mystic enigmatic Spellbound charismatic E'er melodramatic Sweet discretion Sacred sanctuary Lovers legendary Raw imaginary Sweet impression Wandering allseeing Spirits freely fleeing Roaming unbound being Sweet obsession Candied fine confection Dulcet recollection Stirring retrospection Sweet digression AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on September 29, 2018 for contest STANDARD No.120 sponsored by BRIAN STANDARD and on April 1, 2018 for VIOLETTE POETRY CONTEST sponsored by MICK TALBOT

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James Inman

Date: 4/7/2018 10:28:00 AM

Very good Line. Enjoyed the limited but precise word usage. Your rhyme is excellent.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, James.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/2/2018 12:05:00 PM

Ooooo you know how I love a good rhyme this was phenomenal! Thanks for sharing!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 1:14:00 PM

So happy you liked this Kyle. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Larry Bradfield

Date: 4/1/2018 10:31:00 PM

Nicely done, Line! A creative write that should do well in my opinion!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 11:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Larry.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2018 9:21:00 PM

excellent write, Line, luck in the contest.. .. Hope you had a wonderful Easter...Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 10:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Easter was wonderful. Line xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2018 5:36:00 PM

So sweet it is, indeed, Line!! This contest I keep putting off and I hope it's still around because I really want to try one too. Happy Easter Fool's Day!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 10:28:00 PM

I know what you mean, Andrea. I've been caught procrastinating a couple of times. Thanks for your visit.

John Gondolf

Date: 4/1/2018 11:55:00 AM

Nicely written, Line, best of luck in the contest. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/1/2018 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your lovely Easter visit and comment.