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Venus ( 1.618 : 1 )

Venus ( 1.618 : 1 ) Who would see such bare force light To be or break the bonds of anonymous A panorama clouds sunset-ed bright Captured in the form Made sensual by her scarlet dress Far to beautiful not to cause Some moment of silence Some heartbeat ache And drowning in curves pauses momentarily To ponder on the thoughts of her dreams She is “who” secretly Inside the souls personality Pray quietly Oh Goddess Venus Feminine centre Venus Pour upon her lips A syllable of desire Wanting increasing To place the passion word Upon these lips of mine And need Sweet Goddess Venus Need to be A wanting unity joined By Venus

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Date: 11/28/2008 9:42:00 AM
Colin this poem is exceptional. What beauty and love shown. Flowed perfectly, a passion shown. Colin this is up there with any love poem I have read. Put this in a contest let everyone see. You have won my vote not because Im your friend but more importantly because I tell the truth. My father loved this poem I made a copy for him he paints and I think you have inspired him to paint Venus. Thank you Colin for this one my father joy brings happiness to me and you have created that in him. Michael
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