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Velvet As Laughter - Blitz

gray day gray velvet velvet pillows velvet cheeks cheeks flushed cheeks pale white white as snow white as paper paper cranes paper boats boats which sail ponds boats reflected reflected from clouds forms forms made by children forms diminutive diminutive fingers diminutive toes toes cool in the water toes nibbled nibbled peanut butter sandwiches nibbled blueberries blueberry skies blueberry tongues tongues of storm tongues of rain rain on the lashes rain on the grass grass covered in droplets grass Kelly green green luscious in low light green wet and clean clean as the storm crossed day clean as an oragami lily lily of the valley lily sweet the day day of cool quietude day subtle and warm warm as hot caramel warm as your arms arms strong arms engulfing engulfing the sky and earth engulfing the passive scene scene full of storm clouds now scene of umbrella laughter laughter of children pink-cheeked laughter in sapphire eyes eyes mischievous mischievous eyes

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Date: 7/31/2014 2:35:00 PM
Debbie this looks like a very fun form, you did well...David
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Date: 7/31/2014 1:30:00 AM
ah diminutive fingers! had to break out my thesaurus! This poem has PIZAZZZ! By the way, you are always spot on in your analysis of my poems. I can't believe it. How do you do it? Even the abstract ones. You may be the Poet Whisperer!
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Date: 7/28/2014 2:15:00 PM
Wow loved it great style and idea, well done. Pete.
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:50:00 PM
You took me on a ride, Debbie!! Yummy things to nibble...lovely things to feel..beautiful imagery... :) Thanks for sharing!!
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