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When all the snow-capped mountains to your heart have been climbed Would that I reach the lush valley seen in my dreams To paint the image of your face upon its canyon walls burned from memory To lay beside the waterfall of your yearning where wishes and perfection are found wrapped in the arms of sensual grace hearing songbirds sing their songs in harmony To wait for the setting sun that approaches in silence so we can listen for the echoes of our heartbeats as they travel through the valley from distant dreams And pay homage to our interwoven souls with their welcomed sounds of love as we journey into the wilderness of needs to find the ancient, lost realm of paradise 9/24/17 contest Form V...word used valley sponsor Broken Wings

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Date: 10/6/2017 6:58:00 AM
Frederic, you've painted a beautiful image filled with passionate emotion.
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:28:00 PM
This is a wonderful write filled with images and metaphors that make the words come alive. Congratulations,
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:23:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/4/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for my placement in your contest and thank you for these contests by using the alphabet
Date: 9/24/2017 9:29:00 PM
Lovely write, Frederic, luck in the contest.Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:39:00 AM
Delightful...as always, Frederic. You write of love, romance and passion so well. Hugs, dear.
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:50:00 AM
Very well written Frederic. It reads so smoothly. Good luck in the contest :)
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