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Valley In the Clouds

My dearest, meet me next to the bluest of blue, streams. Wearing your sparkling, silver angel wings. I do promise to fly to you, mon le beau! We'll kneel on the freshest of God's greenest grass, And embrace on our knees as only angels do! Right next to a flowering bush, with divine fragrance and tiny butterflies applauding our romance. With their gauze like wings, in a colorful, dazzling, butterfly dance. In our Arcadia, a joyful, secret, sunrise romance. August 7,2019 1am PST

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Date: 8/7/2019 8:47:00 PM
It sounds so cozy, so intimate, so natural --- so much better than some restaurant or some such. Very nicely done! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/7/2019 8:54:00 PM
And I agree. A poem of mine you commented on early hatched into today's POTD.. Thanks for your magic PR
Date: 8/7/2019 10:59:00 AM
Reads like a fairy-tale. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2019 12:18:00 PM
Hi Tom! I can literally feel and see this. Thanks again for the news, that one of my poens is POTD today. You were like Santa, telling me that. It was truly a gift. My love and respect, Panagiota
Date: 8/7/2019 8:01:00 AM
So beautiful...the romance with all its glory!
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Date: 8/7/2019 12:14:00 PM
Kim, thanks...romance ahhh! Panagiota
Date: 8/7/2019 3:37:00 AM
A nature poem very well penned.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/7/2019 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, accept your Comment most gracefully. Panagiota in California

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