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Valintines- Our Year In Love

It was 2014, how could I forget? Most gorgeous woman i'd ever seen, and yes, you were smoking my brand of cigarette! Outside Starbucks sipping coffee, in the most beautiful red dress. I noticed how you looked at me, yet, I thought I looked a mess! You would later say; "Baby, I loved that scruffy look." No, I could never forget that day, for the magic in your eyes was all it took! Small chit-chat about this and that, as we sipped coffee eating pastry. As we got up, I grabbed my hat, and thought, 'we are like universal poetry'! I wondered, how could a woman of such beauty, could be spending time on Valentines alone. Such a breath of fresh air was your company, and I had this flutter beneath my breast bone! Hand in hand through Central Park, February had a chilly wind. We both smiled, feeling loves spark, and released heart never break- just bend! We walked and spoke for hours on end, just as 'hopeless romantics' spoke of; I held you close from the wintry wind, and I knew it was going to be Our Year In Love! 2/10/2016 wrote for Contest Year In Love

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Date: 2/29/2016 9:46:00 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
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