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Valentine's Day Poem, of Sorts

Valentine’s Day Poem Never knew what to do With the roses he brought me, After the red had rotted And soothing scent had slipped. So I leave them, Weeping, Wilting, In a coffin vase By my window, As I dream About dandelion weeds Swimming in a field of green, Free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2011 11:40:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Nicole. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 3:51:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, very well put together
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup0.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on site will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out our contests too...
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Date: 2/11/2011 9:06:00 PM
wow, I LIKE this kind of Valentine poem, yup!!
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:30:00 PM
Very deep I really like this poem
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Date: 2/11/2011 6:56:00 PM
An interesting writing. Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here.
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