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Valentine
To you my honey, my tasty treasure For whom love has blossomed beyond measure From the moment we met I knew we should Be together and was sure that we would. Each day I awake glad to be alive Feeling zealous with a joy I can't hide You’re the star in the movies of my dreams My knight on a charger whose splendour gleams. I love how your eyes gaze at mine fondly The gentle touch of lips when you kiss me I love how it feels when I’m in your arms I'm spellbound by the magic of your charms. My wishes have come true, it's heavenly I’ll be dancing on air for eternity The muse of my poetry thou sure art Thine love sublime, the song in my heart. Yours till the day that I run out of rhyme My sentimental divine Valentine. *+*+* 18th January 2023 Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 2/4/2023 4:03:00 AM
Belle your valentine poem is awesome - i love the very touching words you used and your rhyming so perfect . Your two last lines are so sentimental and give perfect closure to such a delightful poem. Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/4/2023 6:20:00 AM
Jennifer, thank you so much those words mean a lot. Hugs and blessings in return… Belle
Date: 1/29/2023 4:06:00 AM
Very romantic lines you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender in Mystic's contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/29/2023 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Sara, most appreciated… Belle
Date: 1/22/2023 2:27:00 PM
Belle, this is so very perfect, Each line! And hope you are doing better, dear Belle! Pangie
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2023 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Pangie, I’m slowly getting myself together… Belle
Date: 1/22/2023 8:29:00 AM
Belle! Beautiful Belle! This is my tale as well…Exactly! that i would pen to my own beloved Valentine! I’m emailing it to Jim. I thank you! It’s so wonderfully, heartfully stated. Blessings on your love! xox sally
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2023 6:10:00 PM
Sally, thank you so much, I’m thrilled that you liked the poem enough to send it in an email to Jim. Blessings to your and your love too… Belle
Date: 1/21/2023 7:35:00 PM
Sweet, sweeter and sweetest, Belle. HVD!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2023 6:02:00 PM
Sugar for my honey ~ Thank you Gerson, Happy Valentine’s Day is wished for you too… Belle
Date: 1/21/2023 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Belle. Harry
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2023 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Harry, I hope you are feeling much better now you’re home from hospital… Belle
Date: 1/20/2023 12:59:00 PM
A lovely, sentimental pen for someone special on valentine's day. Enjoyed.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 1:27:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed M. L. pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
Date: 1/19/2023 10:15:00 AM
You gave me more than roses, you gave me poetry of love. You stood out from the rest, guess you must be the best. Thank you, from my heart :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:38:00 AM
Thank you from my heart Rose, those words mean a lot, also I’m overjoyed with my placement in your contest… Belle :)
Date: 1/18/2023 11:23:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful Valentine card. May it last all the years of your life.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words and good wishes Victor… Belle
Date: 1/18/2023 12:11:00 PM
Your love, Belle, is as powerful as it has always been. I hope that both you and Alan are doing well and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Sotto, we’re doing well though Alan is still having health problems to deal with… Belle
Date: 1/18/2023 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful loving poem Belle! :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, appreciated. Belle :-)
Date: 1/18/2023 10:28:00 AM
Your love is as strong as ever Belle. Good luck in the contest Hope you and Alan are doing well. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Tom, we are still faced with ongoing problems but getting on with life as best as we can. Belle
Date: 1/18/2023 10:23:00 AM
- A beautiful and romantic valentine poem, Belle :) - Lucky him who will receive this - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2023 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I’m sure and hopeful that the poem will be well received. Hugs in return, Belle :-)

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