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Vain, Clueless Vaughn

Meet vain, clueless Vaughn, introvert he offers a drink, he's alert. Bold Brenda comes on with kisses for Vaughn; wine spills on his brand-new white shirt. He grabs for a towel in a sec and sopping, finds arms ‘round his neck. What’s next? more or less, I’ll leave to your guess. when spring air blows across Vaughn's deck. February 16, 2022 host: Mohan Chutani contest: Spring in Air

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2022 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/24/2022 4:29:00 PM

a yummy poem dear poet, congrats on your win, :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2022 3:37:00 AM

thank you, Rose. I like the word "yummy" and take it to mean tasteful and fulfilling. Neat word for poetry.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/24/2022 10:26:00 AM

Sounds like this has been written from experience ~ a lovely spring memory... lol

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2022 3:40:00 AM

We gave up our deck 4 years ago, but have many pleasant memories thereon. Just built a lean-to last fall for our new home, looking forward to the cool spring and summer breezes flowing through the slats as we live and love therein. Love your comment, thanks again, and God bless.

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 2/24/2022 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Reason! I love the narrative you created, as well as the humorous characters! Even better was how you tied it all together at the end with spring. Very well crafted by a very talented poet! Way to go! God bless and much love...Meghan

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2022 3:35:00 AM

THANK YOU, Meghan. What a lovely, engaged reply - I welcome it with open heart and eyes. I appreciate your support and encouragement. May God bless you and your family as well as you serve Him.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/24/2022 6:46:00 AM

Very cute and I love you left the guessing to us. Congratulations on your win with this funny Limerick Reason. Blessings xxoo

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. Glad you read it and left a lovely comment.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/24/2022 3:42:00 AM

Wow! This is a delightful limerick my dear friend, Reason. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your great win!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/25/2022 3:45:00 AM

Thank you Len. It was an enjoyable write for a contest elsewhere and I thought it was appropriate an an entry in Mohan's spring in air. I was not disappointed. Thanks, limericks are difficult to get the rhythm right; but this one came about fairly smooth.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/23/2022 9:01:00 PM

Thankyou for participating in my contest. Your connect to Spring showed how even introverts can enjoy romantic moments in lovely surroundings. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/24/2022 1:07:00 AM

Thanks, Mohan. I appreciate your generosity in awarding my piece a placement in your contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/23/2022 7:45:00 PM

Cute one! Congrats!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/24/2022 1:07:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I welcome your brevity.