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kite firm in hand no sun no wind no string spiritually bankrupt dark thoughts stir up a breeze Submitted on March 29, 2018 to LATE MAR 2018 STANDARD CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/2/2018 11:10:00 AM

Awesome.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment, Kai. Much appreciated.

Samuel Otieng

Date: 4/2/2018 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Line. Nice poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 11:39:00 AM

Thanks, Samuel, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/31/2018 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I like this form.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2018 11:07:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Susan.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/31/2018 5:12:00 PM

Thought provoking. I sense what you may mean. Congrats on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2018 6:55:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2018 7:59:00 AM

This metaphorical kite needs a touch of uplifting spirituality, Line! May Spring and Easter bring joy into your heart:) Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2018 8:01:00 AM

Yes, Paul. Easter sunshine will help that! Thanks for your visit and wishes. (Not an account of current feelings, Line xx)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2018 10:09:00 PM

Nicely done, Line, luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 10:37:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated. Have a wonderful Easter as well.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/30/2018 8:23:00 PM

Thought-provoking piece, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Janice.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/30/2018 8:46:00 AM

Very interesting, Line. not sure what that dark breeze will do to your kite but sending good wishes, Happy Easter xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 5:46:00 PM

Not great Easter material. LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Mike.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2018 5:09:00 AM

This Kimo twirled me around and threw me on the ground, Line. Kite brought me up, and suddenly no sun, no wind, no string. You have captured what I've been feeling during a spring break where I've been sick, and the sun is not out. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Happy Easter.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 7:16:00 AM

We are so very ready for some cheerful Spring sunshine!! Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Caren...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/30/2018 2:19:00 AM

Sometimes life is like that line. We wonder where did the sun go to. Happy Easter. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for your warm visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.