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You came to me on a Winter's day and tried to take my pain away, with tenderness and your desire, you tried to light an ashen fire But I was cold to your embrace, empty heart filled with empty space My days have felt a chill again, this coldest storm with stronger wind To have seen the sun, watch it fall, hear the sound when my heart grew mall When love was gone and left no trace, from yesterdays that were misplaced I've crossed a bridge and left my pride to find a place my love to hide You are a friend, to share a need My loneliness you won't impede

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Date: 12/13/2016 11:31:00 PM
So sad...tears fall on my cheeks. Tears of my likeness to the words. My likeness to the lack. God bless us...
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:21:00 AM
Lovely, Frederick!
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Date: 11/16/2016 3:42:00 PM
Simply beautiful!
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Date: 11/16/2016 3:04:00 PM
Wow Frederic, your reading was very moving. Exceptional write my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:16:00 PM
- A beautiful poem that you read with deep emotion, Frederic - Thank you for reading this to me, I enjoy it a lot ... although it felt very sad - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/16/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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