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Urban Surprise

On my city walks, a sighting Of some wildlife oft prevails But today I was surprised to see A little group of snails. Two were inching very slowly To the edges of a path Though with runners soon approaching, Things looked sketchy – do the math. One crushed shell nearby was telling So I hoped they’d be all right For along the promenade, a snail Is not a common sight. Later, I saw many pigeons And a chase involving mice But it took some slimy crawling snails To get me looking twice.

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Date: 6/23/2022 12:23:00 AM
Cute ending. I saw one yesterday tooin my backyard!
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Date: 6/22/2022 8:24:00 PM
Yuk! You could have invited Anais Vionet over for breakfast . . . .but at least you did not need to worry about being run over whilst eating your bagel! Aloha!
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Date: 6/22/2022 5:07:00 PM
How lovely, Ilene. I doubt that you see many wild animals, except when in the park. As we have invaded their territories, we are seeing more and more deer, bear, coyotes and the like in small midwestern towns.
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