Get Your Premium Membership

Untold Passion -Tb

Fast the ice holds on limbs old with untold passions. Frozen in sleep buds won’t leap till rays sweep branches easing vice grip. Kept tears drip at last, slipping fast. February 4, 2019 For Than Bauk Poetry Contest Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/13/2019 3:20:00 PM
Beautifully penned Rita many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Simmonds Avatar
Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/13/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 2/12/2019 2:28:00 PM
Well constructed Rita, with the first & last stanzas my favorites, jmg
Login to Reply
Simmonds Avatar
Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/12/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jim!
Date: 2/11/2019 7:43:00 AM
Nicely done, Rita. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...Charlie
Login to Reply
Simmonds Avatar
Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/11/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie!

Book: Shattered Sighs