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Did you know that there was a time I hovered between now and never? I roamed my space blindfolded thinking I knew it all. Like a rocket, I felt I was flying upwards only to fall in disgrace. Hope reigned but soon I found I was but an empty shell. All I had struggled for seemed in vain. Until you came on the scene. Showed me my failings, praised my efforts, moved me in the right direction. You oozed with energy, supplied great thoughts. I knew what joy was. I looked at the future. I felt hope once more. Not euphoria, not elated thoughts. Just plain common sense which is not common at all. All because of you.

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Date: 6/29/2021 6:06:00 AM
What a beautiful love poem. The pic is perfect for this. It speaks of two people who have found their soul mates in each other. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/27/2021 8:49:00 AM
It’s wonderful to find the one who raises you up as you did when you found true love. A beautiful poem Victor… Belle
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Date: 6/25/2021 9:08:00 PM
Sometimes we all need that, a little push in the right direction from someone who believes in us, well written, Victor:)
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Date: 6/25/2021 8:46:00 PM
Wow, Victor, a poem that touches the positive and the negative of life, You tell of life so well, excellent poetry.
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Date: 6/25/2021 1:16:00 PM
You're nobody 'til somebody loves you, as the song goes. Your touching poem captures the importance of having love in your life. Hugs, Evelyn :)
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Date: 6/25/2021 10:01:00 AM
Great feelings of being brought to earth again, with hope. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/25/2021 9:50:00 AM
How wonderful when someone puts wings on our back and helps us achieve new summits in life. That can happen at any age dear Victor, Another beauty, from the great Master , Thank you
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Date: 6/25/2021 7:29:00 AM
A wonderfully penned poem, dear Victor, It's calming and comforting. We all need that particular someone who has a magical way of illuminating our life. So romantic and delicious. Have a blessed and peaceful day
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Date: 6/25/2021 7:19:00 AM
That special someone has a magical way to inform our lives. Beautiful and romantic poem, Victor.
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:59:00 AM
Ah! Soothing & reassuring
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:46:00 AM
Finding that one special person....very nice indeed..Delice
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:06:00 AM
- When two hearts merge into one ... beautiful, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:20:00 AM
Sometimes it takes the other side of a relationship to make you feel whole again. Tom
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:13:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic work. When a couple first meets and dates life is seen through the eyes of love until that first disagreement. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit. Sara
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Date: 6/25/2021 3:35:00 AM
It is that pairing that often brings what is needed…what is missing.
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