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UNTIL TOMORROW, FEEL SAFE IN MY WARM EMBRACE

Until tomorrow, feel safe in my warm embrace;
don't feel the rage of those frightening storms...
whisper a passionate wish--- a sentimental phrase.


Stars won't appear to delight, excite and appease;
and with gloominess and clouds to marr our days...
until tomorrow, feel safe in my warm embrace.


We are stupefied by the butterflies's frantic dance;
they swirl with joy, then slowly land on our shoulders...
whisper a passionate wish--- a sentimental phrase.


Shunning faith and obedience is to live without grace;
God has blessed us and given us true happiness...
whisper a passionate wish---a sentimental phrase.


And should unfaithfulness ever bring us disgrace,
let that thought quickly vanish into darkness;
until tomorrow, feel safe in my warm embrace...
whisper a passionate wish---a sentimental phrase.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:07:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 6/20/2010 10:53:00 AM
This is now my new favorite poem thank you and keep on writing poems your great at it ~!~Heather~!~
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:51:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest.
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Date: 6/16/2010 10:38:00 AM
If we live without faith, we can never find happiness, Andrew. I can feel the warmth of your embrace throughout this villanelle. Excellent use of the form to convey an uplifting message. Beautiful words, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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