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Until Then 10/11/24 Pick-A-Title,Vol 46 Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
Verse one: One day when all the air is gone When the stars grow where the trees belong I will still love you If there comes a day when all is gray Cause to the moon, all colors ran away Oh I will still love you If suddenly pigs really fly And broken hearts don't make us cry Don't you worry, I will still love you Chorus: I will love you until then, I will love you Until the sun rises high under the sea Until the oceans drain and nothing remains Except eternity Until then I'll love you and you'll love me Verse Two: Sometime when even time won't exist And your sweet kisses I can resist I will still love you A time when all we know is turned upside down When what holds it together comes unbound I will still love you And if you ever say goodbye, I'll keep begging you for one more try And even then, I will still love you Chorus: I will love you until then, I will love you Until the sun rises high under the sea Until the oceans drain and nothing remains Except eternity Until then I'll love you and you'll love me Bridge:/tag: Perhaps when I am dead and gone My love for you won't be as strong? But that's the one thing I'll never believe You can tell me there's only dust where mountains once stood Or that God is bad and the devil is good But never say There will come a day When our love will fade away... Cause, I will love you, even then, I will love you Chorus: I will love you until then, I will love you Until the sun rises high under the sea Until the oceans drain and nothing remains Except eternity Until then I'll love you and you'll love me

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Date: 10/17/2024 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful love song Crystol!
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Date: 10/14/2024 1:33:00 AM
Wow! An excellent lyric my dear poet friend Crystol. I can imagine it in a very beautiful melody. My fave poem and song. Thanks for sharing for this precious artwork.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/14/2024 11:32:00 AM
Wow thank you Len! What a wonderful compliment! Xo
Date: 10/11/2024 4:17:00 PM
romance never had it so good until now, crystal, with this mellow lyric...well, we chose the same theme but yours is way up there on the charts! blessings
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/14/2024 11:31:00 AM
Awe that's super sweet of you to say! I'll come by and read yours too in a bit! I'm sure it's poetry gold as usual! Xo
Date: 10/11/2024 1:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away...................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/14/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Paula! Xo
Date: 10/11/2024 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful song, especially the chorus, though I liked the bridge too. Now, break out that uke and let's here the audio Please
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/11/2024 11:57:00 AM
I'm working on it lol... it sounds way too country/ blue grass. I just can't help going back to my roots with music! I really wanted this to be more of a singer songwriter indie vibe...idk. anyway thank you so much for coming by to lmk what you think! I'll lyk if i ever get a good melody. Xo

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