Get Your Premium Membership

Until Etternity

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like sidney dugan.



Until Eternity

Once we two did fall in love
It does seem so long ago
Rain was falling from above
When I knew I loved you so
Now as the years have moved on by
Still us two we are together
Our love will never die
We’ve lived through each kind of weather

We two have been through everything
Some real bad times our lives did bring
But our true love did conquer all
For love it is so wonderful
Fifty five years have passed on by
And we’re together you and I
And love still shines in we
It will until eternity

Pedro’s #58 Double Octave
Created by Peter Duggan 01 02 16
Each stanza in syllables of 7,7,7,7, 8,8,6,8
Rhyme sequence
First stanza ababcdcd
Second stanza aabbccdd
Center align

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 1/18/2019 9:55:00 PM
Your wife is going to have the best books ever to show her book club!
Login to Reply
dugan Avatar
sidney dugan
Date: 1/18/2019 11:34:00 PM
Hi Caren I write them and place them in a load of Tubs. There are thousands upon thousands in the tubs, and they never get seen only when I put them on the sites. And in the books published. to me they are just words which I love creating. There's not much chance of me becoming famous LOL thank you for your kind comments, my friend....petercomments, my friend
Date: 1/18/2019 5:28:00 PM
sweetly expressed. enjoyed ElsaR
Login to Reply
dugan Avatar
sidney dugan
Date: 1/18/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Elsa. I sincerely appreciate your kind words....Peter
Date: 1/18/2019 5:16:00 PM
This is so nice to hear! What a strong relationship! :)
Login to Reply
dugan Avatar
sidney dugan
Date: 1/18/2019 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much. As always, my friend your kind comments inspire me. Have a great weekend....peter