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Unspeakable... So I Wrote It Down-

somewhere I was gently cruising as I dreamed everything I saw was magically vivid it seemed like the color applied to a painter’s brush slowly gliding because I was in no rush I remember it all and I was wearing a smile but everyone else’s happiness was placed in a file then came a sad schizophrenic summer storm instead of drops dripping from a cloud, they were torn and all the lights began to change their shade as the roads leading home began to fade I wondered like a ghost whose fate was sealed like the floating fog dancing on top of a field I saw mountain romances that slowly evolved but their question of love or lust never was solved people’s life were buzzing like a honey hive and the queen’s command would never survive the ungoverned ground began to chain all creatures as freedom surrendered its only true feature of a visionary’s life unbound by anyone’s words the sky spiraled black as the stars turned to birds the harbor’s channel filled with endless sand as the candle lit prophet was trying to understand just then the haystack hills leveled with the earth and the golden peaks quickly lost there worth but hope replaced the fear that we live by and white holes opened up in the sinister sky as wingless angels wanting to fly must now climb and in the end, the acidic onlookers ran out of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 7:00:00 AM
Awesome title! It sounds like a classic, everything seems so perfect,,,,but look deeper. When I read it I thought how wonderfull and aesthetically pleasing the things of this world are but hold no true lasting hapiness, but there's always hope
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:49:00 AM
this has some creative and amazing imagery here. angles climbing into white holes in the sky? brilliant.
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Date: 2/23/2009 4:33:00 PM
Some dream you had there...good details. I like the flow of it too. A very good write Luke.
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