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The Marquis de Sade's health declined severely, but he remained perverse as ever, decorating his dungeon with a story, using feces as ink due to the denial of paper and quill.

 

Breathe Mutiny Shackle my hands so I cannot write. My words will still put up a fight. If ideas offend you, close the book. If you seek the truth take a closer look. Try all you can to put me down. You will end up looking like the clown. My verse is the voice and ear to my pain, metaphors and similes in haunting refrain. Lock me out the race. Shame and denigrate me. My thoughts will still breathe mutiny. 3/30/17

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Date: 6/27/2021 2:15:00 PM
I love your fighting spirit and beautiful hands, congrats on your win dear Janis
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Date: 6/27/2021 12:10:00 PM
Janis, wonderful and congratulations on your win, love _Constance
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Date: 9/12/2017 1:54:00 PM
A powerful testament to creative freedom of expression this poem be, Janis. Tho I agree in no way, shape or form w/de Sade's twisted S&M sexual predilections ... he should be free to express them, no matter how offensive they are. Great poem, stunning last line: breathe mutiny. Sign me up on your ship, matey, lol! Love and peace.
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Date: 4/22/2017 8:22:00 AM
That is true commitment to writing. Congrats on your win, Janis.
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Date: 4/23/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thanks Agnes.
Date: 4/21/2017 9:28:00 PM
Janis, enjoyed.. congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 4/22/2017 12:26:00 AM
Thanks and blessings to you Eve.
Date: 4/21/2017 7:16:00 PM
A great win, Janis! Congrats
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/22/2017 12:27:00 AM
Thanks for your comments. They come from your heart.
Date: 4/21/2017 10:41:00 AM
A dark write indeed but interesting! Congrats on your win in my contest, Janis!
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Date: 4/22/2017 12:29:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Great contest.
Date: 4/10/2017 9:22:00 AM
Oh! Is this based on a true story or fiction, Janis? Sounds real to me, great take on the theme:)
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Date: 4/14/2017 10:14:00 AM
The movie Quills is based on a true story about the French governments attempt to control the sexually explicit writings of the Marquis de Sade. He is denied paper and pen so this is the result. We never know how far a writer will go to write.
Date: 4/6/2017 2:53:00 PM
Use the walls and a turd!! That's awesome, Janis. Worth multiple reads. I have to investigate this "Quills" movie(?) You referenced. Sounds interesting
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/7/2017 9:19:00 PM
Great movie. Check it out. Thanks for the comments.

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