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Unopened Eyes Co-Written With Doris Culverhouse

Cats on roof in snow Sentinels watching looking Without open eyes The jet flies the governor's Course set to adultery Cat slips on frozen Snow, claws grip the edge, below A fire awaits..... fate Death takes the pilot, In midair the govenor Yearns...jet burst apart Cat's grip is weak claws strip falls Clings to governor's carcass Taxpayers buy a New plane, and exwife's dreams flow... And flames still scorch! (The cats are metaphoric for politicians.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2010 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:50:00 AM
Excellent points in this piece Sara >> good write you two >> James
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Date: 2/18/2010 6:19:00 AM
We will have to do another one some time. I think it turn out good.
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:29:00 PM
Dear Sara, YOU and Doris have a Great Bond I usually don't pay much attention to Political POETRY but such a great Combo Punch by Two of my Favorite Southern Belles YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:48:00 PM
WEll, you and your daughter are great poets together(- I am sorry for the late comments. i am dangerously busy. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:37:00 PM
You ladys work well together. The metaphoric cat fits well. Smile. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/15/2010 10:53:00 AM
Hey, I wrote what I hope to be the end, also. without seeing your lines. hope it works if not I can change it.
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