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Kimo
A Kimo poem is an Israeli form of haiku that has three lines with a 10-7-6 syllable format and which does not rhyme. Therefore, lines of the Kimo also tend to vary in length with each other being longer or shorter than the rest.

        

You recall him kissing away your tears saying angels shouldn't cry holding your hands in his. Those words were whispered with his final breath and that moment hurt so much because it was his last. His eternal soul ascended to heaven but one day, you will join him, and kiss his tears away.

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Date: 11/26/2019 8:49:00 AM
Emile, this piece is so beautiful and moving! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/26/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I welcome your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2019 4:54:00 PM
Very nice Emile. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/25/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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