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Message In a Bottle

_ / / / / / / my darling you mean the world to me how i adore your every smile i love how you wear your heart on your sleeve for you don’t hesitate to say kind affectionate words that touch my heart because each comes directly from the bottom of your heart with clarity genuine integrity you are my rock and I cherish you for all eternity and unconditionally submitted on November 25, 2018 for contest SHAPE POEM sponsored by EVE ROPER - RANKED 2ND

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John Watt

Date: 3/13/2020 2:27:00 AM

Line, really clever and nicely rendered soda bottle shape for this love poem. Picking all those perfectly sized words to make the shape is a real challenge! Well done ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/13/2020 8:17:00 AM

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/17/2018 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations Line, I love your shape, well deserved win xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2018 6:35:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/16/2018 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Line. I thank you for entering my contest "Shapes". This is an excellent poem with great form and verse of love and emotional feeling. Your welcome to visit my Shape Contest Blog... Happy holidays my friend. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2018 11:35:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, for your most appreciated compliment and ranking. Loved your contest.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/16/2018 6:29:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2018 11:35:00 AM

Thanks you so much, Beata. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/15/2018 6:54:00 PM

beautifully created Line i just gave up and couldn't think of how to do one of these again. many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2018 7:52:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, and I can totally understand not coming up with a shape idea... not always as easy as it looks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2018 4:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Line :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2018 7:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2018 5:25:00 PM

Awesome work. Enjoyed seeing and reading. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/5/2018 8:13:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sara. Much appreciated.

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 11/29/2018 5:04:00 AM

To be loved is better than money...kind of :) seems that you've been blessed to find that someone. Nice

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2018 9:37:00 AM

Yes. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Vegter.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/28/2018 4:55:00 PM

Nice poem, nice picture

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2018 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Warren Doll

Date: 11/28/2018 2:57:00 PM

Well written and a great shape, Line. Well done. Warm wishes~ Warren

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2018 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, Warren, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/27/2018 7:04:00 PM

Beautiful sentiments; lovely picture you've painted.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/27/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Mu h appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/27/2018 1:23:00 PM

This makes me think of the Coke bottle and 50's diners, well done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/27/2018 4:06:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelle.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/27/2018 7:02:00 AM

Oh Lovely. A great one for a Valentine card. Love it. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/27/2018 7:06:00 AM

So sweet, Judy. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Mike Hauser

Date: 11/26/2018 3:42:00 PM

Fantastic! I couldn't even begin to do one of these!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 11:23:00 PM

All the more reason to try... surprise yourself, Mike. You can do it!!

Sand Blown

Date: 11/26/2018 2:11:00 PM

decades ago romance was about a coke at the soda shop lol

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:44:00 PM

So true, Sand. Thanks for the lovely comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/26/2018 11:01:00 AM

I was thinking this was going to be a poem about a soda pop with a straw, then I read it and thought it is perfect exactly the way it is. Heart-felt, and solidly loving. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:44:00 PM

Surprise! Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/26/2018 10:16:00 AM

I love the context of this piece Line, these are beautiful meaningful words and the way you have presented them so so clever. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:45:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sylvia.

Constance La France

Date: 11/26/2018 10:00:00 AM

Line, beautifully penned, your love drips from each word ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:46:00 PM

So sweet. Thank you, Constance.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/26/2018 2:08:00 AM

A meaningful poem with lovely sounds. Love the shape!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.