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Unbroken Resolve

Monster clouds roam with fiery open jaws Memories of past freeze momentary pause Storming tides advance with fiery rainfall Followed by sounds of a shattering landfall. Spirits resolve as gusty winds blow roof top Families will soon rise to clean up and mop Determined as ever to mobilize and survive Hoping to keep remnants of memories alive. Leaving behind the dread of storm unbidden Lifting up each time such grief has stricken Moving swiftly hoping for a construction loan Dredging through an atrocious disaster zone. Such repetitious blows becoming annual thing Calling for prayers, God's heavenly blessing Flying high with spirits on the Angel's wings For the love and hope they continually bring. Having heard cries of compassionate calls Resounding like the magnificent Angel Falls With unbroken resolve our nation stands tall Shattered lives rebuild hearing the protocol. September 13, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2018 9:20:00 PM

vijay, hurrah. i found an oldie of yours I have not yet seen before. took me eight clicks to find it and it was well worth it. I have a friend from the Philippines and she says they have yearly storms that are so bad. Where are you? America is getting them a lot now too along the coast and Gulf. This is a great tribute to all the souls who face these storms so bravely.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2018 8:14:00 AM

Hi Andrea..I live in the US..in Maryland..have been in the US for almost fifty years. The theme in this poem speaks to the storms in the US. Thanks for the comments.

Terry Shuff

Date: 9/19/2017 5:44:00 PM

good tribute to resilience and fortitude. right on rhyme.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 5:57:00 PM

Thanks terry..appreciate your feedback!

James Swartz

Date: 9/14/2017 7:10:00 AM

Such a powerful piece about courage, strength and resolve! Awesome write my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 7:34:00 AM

Thank you James for your lovely feedback!

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/13/2017 8:47:00 PM

Timely write Vijay, best wishes...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 6:30:00 AM

Thank you Charlie!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/13/2017 5:48:00 PM

This is so true, we must remain strong with a good resolve that things have to get better! Your write is already awesome, I truly enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, such a grand write my friend! Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback as always!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/13/2017 4:55:00 PM

Well done Vijay! Yes, we must pray, rebuild and stay strong. Good luck in the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 5:29:00 PM

Thank you Heidi for your support and lovely feedback!