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Unbreakable, a Friendly Collaboration With Wayne Hill

You are the wild grass growing between the sidewalk crack. The support you need rests on my sturdy, rugged back. I am the peak sheltering you from flashing thunderstorms. The path we walk, I will clear of thistles and sharp thorns. Life's meaning is clear when shared with an eternal friend. And time will know about our unbreakable strength. Worry not about the whirlwind of the past. Rough surfaces will no longer last. As I promise you a peaceful tomorrow. By drinking the bitter ocean of yesterday's sorrow. It was great fun collaborating with a very Talented Wayne Hill. The first five lines were written by Wayne and last five lines by me [ Smriti Jha]

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Date: 12/3/2011 12:32:00 PM
Hello Smriti. i enjoyed the collaborative write,, and thank you for the comments you left on mine some tlme ago:)
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Date: 9/21/2011 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Smriti. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:59:00 PM
congrats on your top spot win with this great collaboration, you two really compliment each other :-)
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Date: 9/16/2011 5:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very cohesive work..Congrats to the two of you...Sara
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Date: 9/16/2011 3:38:00 PM
A wonderful write - seamless. congratulations on your win w/wayne :)
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Date: 9/16/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations. a worthy winner in this contest. a bond of friendship. Well done..Marg
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:01:00 PM
Well done and congratulations. There was no obvious difference, very nice.Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:49:00 PM
Beautifully written Smriti!! Just a wonderful take on friendship!! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest your poem with wayne was amazing xxx much luv
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:50:00 PM
Congrats Smriti on first place win with this great collaboration luv.. awesome piece...
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