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Just yesterday, Winter made the front page; today, the headlines are all about Spring. Hailing the changes only She can bring, like warm breezes to disarm Winter's rage. But like the musings of a wizened sage, the doldrums of Winter manage to cling. And the robin redbreast must wait to sing, a playful Spring has not yet come of age. Today, it's cloudy and about to snow, as temperatures fall below zero. And a sulking sun refuses to show, forcing signs of an early Spring to go. And yet, though She fled, She's still my hero; we've had at least two warm days in a row.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/20/2018 1:22:00 PM
Hello Emile, I wish you the best of luck on your book. I hoe you do very well with it. This poem is beautifully done.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/20/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank so much Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2018 4:00:00 PM
Ahh my good friend, you do sonnets so exceedingly well! A pleasure and a delight to have found and so enjoyed reading this glowing gem.. A fav ..
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Date: 8/27/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Robert, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/24/2018 1:56:00 PM
A most lovely Italian sonnet, Emile, where lines flow smoothly accompanied by flawless rhyme, and a touch of humour to round it off. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/24/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Paul, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/24/2018 11:28:00 AM
I feel the yearning for spring in your poem. Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 8/24/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always your input is most welcome my friend, Emile.

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