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Two Friends

Tiredness seeps slowly away, As night caresses after a hard day! Warm and bright, Day soothes the pains from night! Two friends, ones' hard, other delight!

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Date: 9/5/2017 9:47:00 AM
Friendship between night and day as a metaphor represents what friendship really is: offsetting mutual deficiencies and enhancing mutual strengths.The diction"Tiredness seeps slowly away, As night caresses" or "Day soothes the pains from night!" drive the point home.Good luck Mansi.
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Mansi Sharma
Date: 9/6/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank u so much for the words of appreciation! What a great explanation of the write!

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