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Twilight

TWILIGHT tangerine horizon tantalizing senses, trilling homecoming birds... tweeting mates in warm nests, transcends ordinary trifles of daily life to great magnificence. April 26, 2021 For Pleiades T Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 4/28/2021 9:42:00 AM
Beautifully expressed, Mala. Giving this form a poetic feel is not always easy, but you certainly have! Regards // paul
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Paul. Your appreciation means a lot. BW ~ Mala
Date: 4/27/2021 11:59:00 AM
Hello Mala, a beautiful scene with your words. Love & Friendship, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2021 4:03:00 PM
Hello Mala i say that you did it well. Love and Friendship. Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/27/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. My first attempt at Pleiades. Love Friendship ~ Mala
Date: 4/27/2021 2:02:00 AM
I've seen so many Pleiades that I thank God I am not the judge. This one ought to rank high.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/27/2021 5:02:00 AM
Thanks, Victor. Appreciate your comment.

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