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Turtle Triumphs

Little tommy turtle Riding on the waves Splashing for the fun of it Water he so craves Splashing splishing sploshing Day after day after day Little tommy turtle Will sway and sway and sway Flapping his great flippers Gliding round and round Smiling at the wee nippers As they too are now found They dart across the sands The first day of their swim The dart towards the blue With teeny tiny fin Tommy their to help them Take their first hurrah Then soon they glide like Tommy does Go far, go far, go far Turtle tiptoe triumphs Across that beach so grand Running leaping loving life Beyond that hot, gold sand

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Date: 12/20/2021 12:16:00 AM
Hi Angie….that is just lovely. I think you could write great children’s poems or story books. You seem to have a strength in that area I do believe! Cheers. Debx
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Angela Tune
Date: 12/20/2021 12:24:00 AM
Ah thanks Deb, I was wondering about that yesterday so that’s great to hear, very encouraging, have a great day Deb, just off to catch my train, woo-hoo! X
Date: 12/19/2021 10:34:00 AM
Enjoyed! (I enjoy taking photos of turtles dashing into the sea . . . .)
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Date: 12/19/2021 10:54:00 AM
Awww that sounds lovely Rico, this is a poem inspired by them hatching on Koroni Beach, Kefalonia x