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I watched the boat take off to distant shore With you embarked and me to stay behind No note from you to say goodbye, therefore My heart now is so torn, my eyes so blind For tears refuse to grant me time to see The speed with which you sail away so fast With every second more you steal from me My life with you so dear I thought would last Tentatively I step into the sea The water cold and numbing, in my mind My love is still as present as can be I blindly feel my way. If I could find.... I turn and walk, then run until I fall No more, no love, no more, once and for all *** The house is filled with memories and smiles The photos with us both on every wall My love, I see you walking down the aisle In love, in life, we both were standing tall I feel your kiss, your lips, you in my arms Your hair so blond, still tickles, makes me sneeze I revel in your giggles, feel so warm Without your presence I feel like I freeze I cannot say goodbye, linger a while Because I hear your sweet laugh all around And all I see is fun and grin and smile The tinkling of that all too precious sound I want you back if you still want to be The muse you were and always are to me *** For contest: True Love Waits - 2 English Sonnets Sponsor: Phillip Garcia October 25, 2016

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Date: 1/23/2017 7:24:00 PM
Such a heart felt poem, Darren. Congrats on your placement. Carole Duet
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 11:33:00 PM
Carole, thank you, I really love these sonnets :)
Date: 1/20/2017 7:26:00 PM
Great poem my friend... I hope someday I can write at least half as good as you. Congrats on the contest - very well deserved <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 11:32:00 PM
You can, as good as I do ;)
Date: 1/20/2017 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful write Darren! Congratulations on your win~ Caryl
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 11:32:00 PM
Caryl, thank you so much :)
Date: 1/20/2017 3:03:00 AM
Wow, Duir! Well done on your win! There will be plenty more of these I'm sure! Congrats mate!
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 3:07:00 AM
Meloves sonnets, even though they can be difficult. I LOVED this contest.
Date: 1/19/2017 8:16:00 PM
Look at the Sheriff bringin' it strong with the romantic sonnets! Both were superb and followed form perfectly. The closing couplet was outstanding. Congrats, my friend, 'twas a pleasure to read
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Darren White
Date: 1/19/2017 11:52:00 PM
Sheriff can write sonnets after all. I am proud, and sosososo happy with my placement Phillip, thank you :D
Date: 12/9/2016 1:42:00 AM
Hey Darren. I like your sonnets. I'm perusing in search of your shakesphere!! In the interim check out mine: shakespherian sonnet title: BETROTHED...The Black Pearl (English sonnet)... and Widow's Walk which is themed much like what you just wrote--but not. Hugggs. Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/9/2016 3:13:00 AM
Awww. I am honoured. Thank you. I'm still learning too. All of us are. Ok. Midnight Pearl is on the second page. I was thinking the Caribbean and wrote the wrong title!! Bahahaha.
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Darren White
Date: 12/9/2016 2:53:00 AM
My Shakesphere is nothing compared to yours LOL But I love it, and I am so going to add YOU to my favourite poets ;)
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Darren White
Date: 12/9/2016 1:48:00 AM
Going to check it out. Be back to you later after I had my breakfast and had time to read ;) Hugs Darren xx
Date: 12/2/2016 9:12:00 AM
Excellent Darren! Did you win? Sonnets are my favourite! I looked up Shakespeare's #4! And wow! Can you imagine being able to write like him?
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Darren White
Date: 12/2/2016 9:55:00 AM
Oh, I would just LOVE being able to write sonnets like Shakespeare... The contest hasn't been judged (yet) because Phillip isn't around at the moment. I hope he will one day be able to judge :)
Date: 11/28/2016 10:56:00 AM
Hey darren....... U know wht.....this reallyvdid made my eyes wet......this is what we call " feed for emotions "
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Darren White
Date: 11/28/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, it's a compliment that it made your eyes wet :)
Date: 11/21/2016 11:18:00 PM
Anchored apon a golden fire. You wait for the love ..of your one desire. really nice write.
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Darren White
Date: 11/22/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Holly. It was a difficult write, this one, but very fulfilling to accomplish it :)
Date: 10/27/2016 1:35:00 AM
These are far far better than mine, Darren:) really enjoyed:)
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Darren White
Date: 10/27/2016 1:47:00 AM
Thanks Jo, but I enjoyed yours!
Date: 10/25/2016 6:31:00 AM
Very nice sonnets ... GL ...
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Darren White
Date: 10/25/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you!

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