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Trickle of Rain and Sunshine

With droplets flip-flapping outside, The gush of rainfall begins to chime Unto the soft fragrance of moistened night... And I tiptoe on naked earth Savoring this minty nectar, While a cadence from drizzles invites My adult- being for a water-dance, a trance Quite delightful in the cascade of sleet-- Till sunshine appears gliding rowing Like a dip from heaven's colored pour! Re-posted 2/22/2018 Sunshine and Showers Contest of Robert Haigh

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/16/2016 4:22:00 PM

A beautiful water dance that sets your spirits free! So many delightful words and phrases, Nette! I see that this is a winning entry, so congratulations! hugs // paul

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/15/2016 9:23:00 PM

Beautiful rain imagery, Nette. Favorite line: "As lucent taps kiss my wet cheeks!" Congrats! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2016 6:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nette ! Hug Eve

Lu Loo

Date: 8/15/2016 5:05:00 PM

Nette, so beautiful lady, one of my faves in the contest...congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/15/2016 1:20:00 PM

pretty poem .Brilliant indeed .

Tom Quigley

Date: 8/14/2016 6:00:00 PM

Vivid write! Excellent!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2016 10:07:00 AM

very descriptive it sets a very joyful tone, Nette

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/13/2016 6:57:00 PM

i'm from a state where it rains a lot and I could feel each line of your poem..good luck my poetic friend this one should do well

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 2:24:00 PM

- A first class write ..... beautiful, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming

Date: 8/13/2016 12:22:00 PM

I thought I would call in and pay my regards, Nette. I am glad I did so...An absolute joy to read - Beautifully composed! My very best as always, Nette...And my warmest wishes. Your friend. :) john

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/13/2016 8:35:00 AM

Such a delightful rain that cleanses and purifies the heart and soul dear, nette! Good luck and a seven!

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/13/2016 8:06:00 AM

Fun stuff, nette. I think I'll pass on the water dance. It could be interesting watching one though. However, the rain always makes me remember youthful days of wading and playing in it. Really enjoyed this fun read. nette.

Lyva Marty

Date: 8/13/2016 7:35:00 AM

Exuberant! I have never experienced rain like this in a long time; I will. Your talent drips!