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A Flash of Memory

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Engraved forever in my mind The smell of sugar pie in the oven And my grandmother's loving hands Their gentleness their softness Ever busy and endlessly creating Only on rare occasions would they stop To play this crazy game called Pinochle That she had taught only me I still see my grandmother's hands holding cards And how she loved this silly game with its silly rules We had to marry kings and queens How gleefully she’d laugh when she did How I loved to listen her childlike joy It never ceased to amaze me This pinochle with its silly rules How my grand-mother loved every minute of it Especially how she would play with only me and then How delicious that slice of sugar pie straight out of the oven A most precious playdate with her grand-daughter of ten AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on April 30, 2018 for JAMIE'S INTERESTING CONTEST 3 sponsored by JAMIE PAN - RANKED 5TH

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Date: 8/26/2018 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Nostalgic imagery. Enjoyed.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/23/2018 1:02:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted here Line. Makes me miss my grandmother :) Congratulations on your win, my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Francesca.
Date: 8/23/2018 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win with a poem so enjoyable to read.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/22/2018 2:55:00 PM
What a delicious and sweet memory....both the remembrance, and the pie :) Lovely poem, Line. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/22/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Carrie.
Date: 5/1/2018 7:37:00 AM
This is sweet, Line. I do not remember any of this with my own grandmother, because my sister liked cooking and baking, whereas grandma fixed me a sack lunch and told me to be home by supper time as I had creeks, and fallen trees, and corn cribs to explore. Good luck in the contest!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 10:27:00 AM
A multitude of fond memories out there.
Date: 4/30/2018 9:35:00 PM
Oh wow....what a lovely memory and what a lovely poem. I am sure this is just what Jamie is looking for! I expect to see it on top :) !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank for your vote of confidence, Carrie. However there is never a shortage of great entries.
Date: 4/30/2018 8:15:00 PM
Granny's cookin' always remains with us, especially the part where they shared it with so much love, Thanks for the memories. beautiful poem Line,
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/30/2018 5:45:00 PM
So nice to have those lovely memories of your special time together Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 6:49:00 PM
Yes indeed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jean.
Date: 4/30/2018 3:13:00 PM
Such sweet, tender memories of you with your dear grandmother, Line, and how well you brought them to life for us in your lovely poem. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/30/2018 3:07:00 PM
ohh, the games that made life so special, line... an endearing, bright work.. hugggs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, nette. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/30/2018 9:13:00 AM
So warm and nostalgic - both my grandmothers passed away when I was quite young, never really had that experience, thanks for sharing this-
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/30/2018 4:37:00 PM
That's too bad, Michelle. Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment.

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