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Beneath the blue azure, I find, Me, listening to the sweet day; Green trees shiver in the cool wind, Oh, what do the chirping birds say. Just dreaming, as clouds go away, In the serene calm and trembling; My life just leaves me wondering, Oh, lovely rest and peaceful bliss. Time for dreaming and for dreaming, On a tranquil day such as this. __________________________ RE-write from August 8, 2012 Dizain Submitted to the contest, A Poem That Time Forgot, Sponsor, Silent One Second Place Original - Featured Poem November 29 - December 5, 2015

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Date: 11/29/2015 9:22:00 AM
This is a poem I want to walk into, and breath the tranquility . Lovely !! Congratulations !!
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Date: 11/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
Carrie, thanks so much for the visit, always a pleasure and for the nice comment and congratulations
Date: 11/28/2015 1:41:00 PM
Broken,, congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 11/27/2015 12:48:00 PM
Sounds wonderful! We all need days like you have described. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:02:00 PM
Kim thanks for the wonderful, the congrats and the love ~
Date: 11/27/2015 8:43:00 AM
you have painted such a lovely relaxing picture here BW, Feeling more peaceful after reading this piece!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:04:00 PM
Kevin, thanks so much for visiting my poetry ~
Date: 11/27/2015 7:35:00 AM
Dreamy! Congrats.
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:04:00 PM
Richard, thanks for the dreamy and the congrats ~
Date: 11/26/2015 11:55:00 PM
Just the picture exudes serenity and the poetry like a cold whiff of air. Congratulations
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:06:00 PM
Samiha, thank you so much for visiting my poetry and for the congratulations ~
Date: 11/26/2015 5:14:00 AM
Great write Constance!!
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Michael ~
Date: 11/26/2015 3:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Broken.. great work!
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats, Upma ~
Date: 11/25/2015 6:16:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, congrats on your win very deserved.JDH
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Date: 11/25/2015 6:58:00 PM
John thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 11/25/2015 5:51:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery a peaceful poem congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2015 6:59:00 PM
Thank you sweet Jan, appreciate the forever support of my poetry ~
Date: 11/25/2015 3:35:00 PM
Wonderful!! Best of luck in the contest! -lu *smiles*
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:59:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful and the encouragement ~
Date: 11/24/2015 8:07:00 PM
It is inspiring to me to see the beautiful thoughts of another. Trembling tranquility. Sensing the vibrations of peace. Great poem!
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Date: 11/25/2015 8:24:00 AM
Falling, thank you for reading my poem and for the lovely comment, appreciate ~
Date: 11/24/2015 7:24:00 PM
I wrote this poem in 2012 a few days after getting out of the hospital. I had been there four months and I was weak and feeble and skinny and full of wondering, happy to say, I am perfectly well now but the experience changed me forever.
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Date: 11/25/2015 8:26:00 AM
The experience took me to another place in my soul, I rediscovered my muse in the trembling ~
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:09:00 PM
In your moment of weakness, you created something brilliant and true.

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