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Train Tracks

I seldom remember my dreams Just the ones that make no sense My dream was about train tracks That was hard to see Because it was very foggy It seemed the tracks had vanished Completely out of sight Yet on ansd on the train travelled I had no idea where I was going On board - I was the only one Oh! How strange- I thought Then the train stopped It was there I got off Then sat on the bench There was fog around me I sat waiting for something I knew not what it was.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2019 3:27:00 PM
Interesting. Life seems to be that way, waiting for who knows.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 5:34:00 PM
Hello Vince Suzadail Jr. Vince i did have this dream, it seemed so real. I have been having this dream a lot the same dream. I do not know what it means. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 9/1/2016 4:46:00 PM
It is the fog and the fog knows when it will lift and reveal what is meant for you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2016 1:41:00 PM
Hello Tim I am waiting for the fog to lift.I enjoy reading your poetry.
Date: 8/28/2016 10:18:00 PM
You painted this dream very well!!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Pace I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 8/28/2016 8:22:00 AM
I hope the answer was eventually revealed to you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2016 10:52:00 AM
Hello Richard,I hope I get an answer to my dream soon.I look forward toreading your poetry.

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