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Breath by breath great puffs of smoke, Broke through the air as he spoke. He passed by grand buildings all of timber. Everything he was but kind and limber. Dark and handsome, strict and solemn. The smoke broke the air column by column. He traveled fast with no time to tarry, The beauty around him all temporary. Gleaming near and all around, White snow seemed to muffle any sound. But he would gape through the silent domain. No time to stop, no time to explain. Dusk filtered the framework of the grove, The tempest refined the woodland as he drove. Trudging his tracks like a metronome, He split the forest painting of monochrome. Into the blizzard he walked along, Whistling his scheduled note like a song. And left behind him a winding chain, For the passing morning train.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:25:00 AM
Victoria Gusenkov, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/16/2016 12:24:00 AM
Again, good to see this...LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2016 1:05:00 AM
Victoria, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Victoria, are you a repeat poet...i already read this post a few days ago...linda
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