'traiku' - Winter To Spring

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Between the end of Winter and the buds of Spring-- Stuck in Frustration. Between the end of Winter and the buds of Spring-- Anticipation. Spring's Bronco Bucking, Nature's poised to burst forth--The Calendar shouts 'Halt!' (Note: This poem is a "traiku:" three consecutive, interconnected haikus)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/19/2018 6:45:00 PM

A beautiful Traiku Gershon. Each is lovely on their own but together your poem is completely awesome! I love your line; 'Spring's bronco bucking' - such animated imagery kicking up its heels!! :) We're about to get our fourth major snowy Nor'ester so far this March, I wish Spring would get 'bronco bucking' here soon! Warmest wishes my friend! ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/19/2018 8:41:00 PM

Yes, I live in SE Mass.. and you sound like a true Bostonian!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/19/2018 8:13:00 PM

O, Susan! Poor you! Are you on the Cape, perchance? Gotta eat more clam 'chowdah.' Or do you pahk ya cah in Hah-vid Skwah?! Either way, here's hoping for an extra-fine Spring and Summer to make up for this wintah! And thanks for checking in on the "traiku!" Your warm encouragement is always uplifting! :) Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2018 9:33:00 AM

oh I especially love the third haiku, great idea of linked haiku Gershon:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2018 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for the praise, Jan. Now, I await your first traiku! I'm sure it'll be excellent. :) Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/15/2018 10:05:00 PM

Awesome and uplifting, Gershon. You're BAAAACK! And, inventing a new form, no less!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2018 10:13:00 PM

All thanks to you, my sweet friend. Kudos! :)gw