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At night I go to sleep with dread, a picture jumps into my head; I hear the thumping of wings- then, a bird in a glass jar is dead. And I dream this same dream again, and again- though I count to ten; day and night are put asunder, so I write with a bleeding pen. Darwin would put me in order, my sadness I would surrender; all my suffering and weeping, helpless me- trapped in a corner. Oh, too much grief I am keeping, I feel shame when grief is creeping; but I must somehow find some joy, and sweet dreams I want when sleeping. _____________________ May 2, 2018 Poetry/Rubaiyat/Too Much Grief Copyright Protected, ID 18-1019-017-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 7/10/2018 7:53:00 PM
It is a very nice Rubaiyat... I know it is not an easy style to work with, but you've done a magnificent job...
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:45:00 PM
Nice dream
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:24:00 PM
What an unsettling dream to have, Constance- reminds me of the painting by our own Derby artist Joseph Wright, 'An experiment on a bird in the air pump'. Release your grief, like a bird.... Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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