Tomorrow Is Behind You

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VOICE: AHMAD RAZVI

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Tomorrow words itself so woolly hidden in nebulae of promises made long ago, or in vague phrases uttered by unseen speakers of... Don't turn your head away, face your past, right in front of you Tomorrow is behind you, obscured See your brokenness, accept your reality, see them unveil in front of your eyes that finally understand Accept the day for what it is: a moment a second, a finite infinite. Take your pain in your hand, observe from all sides, then put aside and breathe. Tomorrow is behind you, obscured Step towards it with head held high *** January 15, 2017

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Sara Ella

Date: 1/16/2017 2:53:00 PM

Wonderful poem Darren ?? Head held high - is great advice. ??

Darren White
Date: 1/16/2017 3:03:00 PM

hahaha, Sara :) Via the navigation list left you can go to My Outboxes > Poetry Replies Outbox, look up your text you want to change and then change it. But it's okay, don't worry :) I'm going to bed now, we speak tomorrow morning (my time), okay?

Sara Ella
Date: 1/16/2017 2:55:00 PM

Apparently I cannot use smiles or hearts - please disregard question marks :)

White Wolf

Date: 1/15/2017 4:25:00 PM

And be brave to face both, Duir! Well all three, today as well! I love how your poetry is so honest! Poetry from the heart.

Darren White
Date: 1/16/2017 12:01:00 AM

Thank Budgie, yes, face all three, I was wondering if I should put that in there as well, but thought nah, this is just perfect as it is :)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/15/2017 4:22:00 AM

Perfectly said my friend - always keep your head high and give that first step to the unknown - loved the poem!!! <3

Darren White
Date: 1/16/2017 10:26:00 AM

I know, I was teasing you ;)

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/15/2017 11:38:00 AM

I sooo loved it! I keep forgetting I can't use my phone's heart, because it turns into a question mark... :*

Darren White
Date: 1/15/2017 4:47:00 AM

I hope you loved the poem ;) Yes, face your past and your future without shame.