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Together Writing a Dare - Collab

Stolen time together where only fireflies see... We cuddle up close and land where we can be free... Up high in the road we sit with clouds as our walls... And with a beautiful background of rainbow falls... A king size playground with fruit in each corner... Our love showers over us with no borders... We dip our lips into it for a taste and savor its sweetness... And with deep kisses that trance and fly endless... Like a mango wrestling a peach, the trail from it sticks... Now covered in juices of love we swallow while the clock ticks... And with drenched sugar coated fingers we drown for awhile... Only to rise back up for another day in our own loving style... Written by Michael & Rosanna Falotico for PD's Dare contest The Dare was to collab with my wife and write about our weekend getaway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/18/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s contest MJF. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2012 2:13:00 PM
Oh yes, a dreamy treat! Congrats on this honeymoon write! You should treat her to a steak dinner for helping you win! Go ROSANNA, GO!!!!!!!! (Girls' RULE!) hahah.
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:39:00 AM
My big congratulations to you Michael & Rosanna on this stupendous win in PD's Dare contest. Yes, you did it in your own loving style! Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 3/4/2012 3:13:00 PM
congrats Michael luv on a fantastic first place win for truth or dare.. amazing collab .. lovely words of luv from lovers in luv... JG .. with luv.. xoxoxo
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Date: 3/4/2012 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Truth and Dare and Free Verse" contest Michael & Rosanna. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:38:00 AM
Nicely written Michael...congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/4/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Michael! Yaayyy!! I thought so this was the winner :D
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Date: 3/4/2012 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Michael, on your win. Cheers, Maureen
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Date: 3/4/2012 2:14:00 AM
Michael congrats on your win, sounds like you both had a fun and busy weekend...Dave
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Date: 3/4/2012 12:43:00 AM
Super steamy, beautifully written, congratulations on the first place.
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Date: 3/3/2012 9:57:00 PM
soooo u liked my guy thingy poem.. Ron thought it was cute too while he was typing it.. I also added another verse about beimg a stud.. oh.. my son texted me .. the pkg. a,me today.. am, so anxious to see it luv.. JG.. back to feminine mode .. xoxoxo..
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Date: 3/3/2012 9:06:00 PM
Michael, this is a very beautiful poem.. ..I have to say.. I enjoyed this contest and your entry so much. Thank you and congratulations on a DARE well done~ALWAYS PD*
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:56:00 PM
So nice to do this with your wife. Those get away weekends renew the spirit. Lovely write. love phyl
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:19:00 PM
Very beautifully written poem you both did..patrick
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:17:00 PM
a collab with the wife; now that was a dare.
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:49:00 AM
I already see this one on the winner's list Michael! Yourself and Rosanna make a perfect couple even in poetry you make magic together! Love Wilma
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:29:00 AM
Love this xx Thank you for all your lovely comments on my poems :)
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:11:00 AM
Hi,Michael I take a short visit to read you last poem(and yours wife) today, a collab and for contest lovely and romantick poem,glad I visit you today.Good luck in contest!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/28/2012 11:17:00 PM
btw, I Love that line "mango wrestling a peach"! just love it :D
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Date: 2/28/2012 11:16:00 PM
Hi Michael :D! This sure is a wonderful collab with Rosanna! :D-- You sure seem to have had a wonderful and romantic weekend with her-- I wouldn't have expected any less from you :D-- awesome write and thanks & xoxo to you for the birthday greetings :D soupmail in a bit :D
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:18:00 PM
wow, you should write with your wife more often. THIS was fantastic, Michael.
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:59:00 PM
a new poetry star is born Michael luv.. now u must get Rosanna to join PS.. wow what fun this must have been and a great dare given by PD.. good luck in contest to both of u .. luv always JG.. xoxo..
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:46:00 PM
I especially like the line "Like a mango wrestling a peach"...I got a chuckle in the middle of the romantic work..Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations to you AND your wife on this great poem. Your both great romantics.
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