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Toconao - Kintaishi

Toconao, Oase im Sand Wunder in der Atacama Wo das klare Wasser fließt Dort am Rande der Düne Verschlingt schon die Quebrada Allmählich der heiße Sand Noch wandere ich langsam Dort im einsamen Traume Wo ruhig in den Gärten Noch leise Wasser plätschert Im kleinen steinernen Kanal Mein einziger Begleiter ein Hund Toconao, oasis in the sand Miracle in the Atacama Where the clear water flows There at the edge of the dune Swallows already the Quebrada Gradually the hot sand Yet I walk slowly There in a lonesome dream Where quietly in the gardens Still purling gently water In the small stone canal My single companion a dog Toconao, oasis en la arena Milagro en el Atacama Donde el agua claro fluye Allí al borde de la duna Cubre ya la Quebrada Gradualmente la arena caliente Aún ando despacio Allá en un señero sueño Donde tranquilo en los jardines Aún chapotea silencioso agua En el pequeño canal de piedra Mi único compañero un perro Note: Tocona is a small Indio village in the Chilean Atacama Desert. This oasis village is located 24 mi south of the town of San Pedro de Atacama at an altitude of 8,153 ft above sea level. The most notable building is the church. The bell tower is separated from the main church structure and dates from 1750. The main source of its 546 inhabitants is based on agriculture and artisan activities. The word "Toconao" comes from the cunzo "toco" that means "stone". Toconao is also known for its alleys of the orchards in the "Quebrada" (= gorge).

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Date: 1/16/2011 9:46:00 AM
Wow! To find a canal in a village so high is almost miraculous. I love the description in your poem as you are walking along the canal with your dog. You provided quite a striking image, my friend. I'm guessing you have been to Toconao. How great it must be to see so many parts of the world. Really enjoyed your tanka, Gert. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:06:00 AM
A spectacular visual Tanka Gert, really beautiful.. Hoop jou naweek is 'n lekker een.. Dankie vir jou kommentaar oor dai pic op facebook ;)
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:02:00 AM
Stupendous imagery Gert and the last line of the dog your only companion is tremendous in photogenic mind... lovely creation this happy Sunday which this "Sweetheart" so enjoyed as always.. with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:45:00 AM
Very educational work..Enjoyed reading and learning..Enjoyed as always because your work always refreshes my Spirit..Sara
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