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To Name a Lily

To Name a Lily The lily. My Lily, is a situational paradox. Before me she sits; stationary but vivid with the promise of the day. Her eyes are deep centered brown that are not unlike a pool of melted bittersweet dark chocolate. Her gaze is light but unwavering, questioning, and alive. She is tall but unsteady within herself. Her self image is a tower of cards that will fall and crumble with the slightest bit of shock. Her frame is thin and slender with just the right amount of curve that makes up her stem. Like a lily what makes her unique spreads out from within. At my feet she blooms and rises with excitement at the sight of me. She is the embodiment of what nature should and should not be. Her roots are weak but her "petals" radiate a sense of originality. She has the hands of a nurturer, a pacifist, and most importantly a lover. Her fingers are long and skinny and they sway and dance and float on currents of air that only she can feel. Her palms are leaves in the wind of her imagination that can only be defined as graceful and elegant. Her singing, impossibly tough, broken heart is that entirely original touch of spilled Crimson on a canvas of white. The lily represents humility and devotion and so does mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/14/2016 3:35:00 PM
They both sound wonderfully enchanting Garrett. Congratulations on your placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/14/2016 1:06:00 PM
Garret, welcome to PS we are please to have you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:39:00 PM
what wonderful personification Garrett I too wrote about this wonderful flower:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:23:00 PM
Garrett Barr, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:37:00 PM
Very good, Garreett, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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