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A Sailor's Solace

Before too long my darling you'll be lacing down your boots; You'll come walking through this front door And find solace in your roots. All this love will find you and the hurt will slip away And then before you know it, it'll be just another day. Laughter will fall across your face and friends will seek your presence; Life will come full circle and you'll laugh at this depression. That steel home you are riding with its bells and rock and rolling Is a temporary resting spot for the boy that's always going. Soon you'll untie those laces; you'll rest your head upon this home, and never for one second will you ever feel alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/8/2016 1:12:00 AM
Soon you'll untie those laces; you'll rest your head upon this home, and never for one second will you ever feel alone. Nice poem.. Congrats for being featured...
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Date: 10/18/2016 10:41:00 PM
maria, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:12:00 PM
Maria, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:02:00 AM
Reminds me of my son while he was serving. Beautifully expressed and I'm going to piggyback, Thanks for being a devoted navy wife. Just lovely, Maria!
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Maria Dudley
Date: 10/13/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Daniel. This too, is for my son. I really appreciate your feedback.
Date: 10/13/2016 8:54:00 AM
You've perfectly captured navy life with easy-to-read rhythm and effective imagery. Steel home ... bells and rock and rolling ... solace in your roots: all wonderful. And thanks for being a navy wife--you're so vital.
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Maria Dudley
Date: 10/13/2016 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much David; however, this is written as a navy mom. This is to my son. I AM a Marine's wife though.

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