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To My Pen

I write with you, to you, to say that I hate you. Whenever I attempt to write, your ink is too dry to write. Then I press you to my paper with vehemence, and all of your ink pours out with vehemence. My frustration with you endless, and your fellow pens are endless. It’s as if there is some blackhole, behind my couch, to which you’ve all gone. Where have all of you gone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/29/2016 12:30:00 AM
Great piece, i could feel the madness. I often feel like this. Great Work, Daniel
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Date: 3/5/2016 12:37:00 AM
I could feel the anger in this piece ... even as you're rhyming words with the same word. Creative piece --- Your first two lines are really funny. Can't live with you, can't live without you.
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Daniel Carter
Date: 3/5/2016 12:02:00 PM
haha, your last sentence is so true. Although, I have a keyboard so I guess I have no excuses for being mad :) Thanks for the read -Dan
Date: 3/4/2016 2:29:00 PM
- Much frustration, Daniel :) - Well done - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Carter
Date: 3/4/2016 2:45:00 PM
I actually looked for that word 'frustration' in the category box but I couldn't find it. Thanks so much for your read :) -Dan
Date: 3/4/2016 1:43:00 PM
great humour Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Carter
Date: 3/4/2016 2:07:00 PM
Thanks so much :) this is an all too common occurrence for me. But when life hands you lemons, you make LEEEEMONAAADE!

Book: Shattered Sighs