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I painted this yesterday out on the dry farm

Alone, standing in a reddened paddock, Dust and heat dance and sway, Then, a small dead breeze joins right in, For a barren and baked ballet, And the windmill shrieks a painful scream, As arthritis turns around, To fill a dry dam with dust and heat, From deep beneath the ground, Still, together they stand, hand in hand, Generations of father and son, Beaten down by the scorching sky, Ever since the drought’d begun. You see, the farmer plays with the land, Growing and playing with heat, Forever, with the dust and dry, Growing the food that we eat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/10/2017 9:44:00 PM
Excellent penning and painting!
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:01:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I'm glad you liked both :)
Date: 12/10/2017 5:10:00 PM
well written, lewis. i love the "barren and baked ballet" line - very poetic!
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Date: 12/10/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Ilene

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