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As I combed your hair so fair, It glistened strawberry red, We embraced nature’s bounty Through the stories that I read Content, tranquil, restful As you laid upon your bed Crisp sheets, below your chest, I tracked your every breath Palm cross beneath your pillow, Same place it's always kept Your elegant, fine eyelashes Curtsied graceful as you slept, I took a million photographs Through the lenses of my eyes As legend Frank, sang us out — Reminisced memories, joy and lies As I combed your hair so fair, It glistened strawberry red, Stitched my heart back together With your loving, golden threads.

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Date: 8/10/2021 1:38:00 PM
Such a fine penned piece Joanna, full of great imagery and insightfulness too. Take care, Gordon
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/10/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 2/19/2021 10:32:00 AM
So lovely and tender, Joanna. I like the triad of words scattered throughout the stanzas and the inclusive format of the poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/19/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/19/2021 6:31:00 AM
Nicely done Joanna. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/19/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/19/2021 3:30:00 AM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest with this wonderful Verse poem, excellent writing and I like your image too _Constance
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/19/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/18/2021 8:52:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Joanna, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/19/2021 1:43:00 AM
Thank you.

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