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Thoughts of Myself - Section 1

Ayo, Once upon a time... Their was a young brave renegade That would love someone solely than detonate Than pick up the pieces and try to renovate Just so he can runaway, and escape just to celebrate He'd instigate and penetrate in almost anyway He had no friends, cause they'd die, and souls would levitate Always showed more love than hate, because he was his own medicaid Only musically meditated, not truly educated but solely dedicated To leave this world devastated, and "awe" within his presence Cause I'll verbally murder peasants and it's not so pleasant When this is their death sentence, Leaving them jealous When they go to hell, and I'm attending the heavens But the thoughts of you snap me right back To the love and adolescence trapped behind a time gap It's like I took a nap to relax and pass these lonely facts But I got passed it, and regained my own passion Passing by my own patronized actions Probably now just pacifying and laughing trying to imagine Why I was so maddened, I'm like a wolf blowing down pigs cabins I'm the captain shooting lyrical cannons trying to capture the captive The caption to the story is "Aladdin's reconnection with his Jasmine" But it's forever lost, cause life it's not magic It's just a tragic damaged planet filled with only havoc Happiness is riddled upon his own sadness Please move on to section 2!

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Date: 12/31/2014 9:40:00 AM
Your narrative...Wow! Just the flow of words fit together so naturally. Hypnotic and satisfying!
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Trent Billy
Date: 12/31/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Ty Townsend, Hopefully more and more of these poems very soon!
Date: 12/25/2014 9:23:00 PM
WOW, Love the bio, WOW Billy , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Trent Billy
Date: 12/31/2014 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Linda! A very much appreciated warm welcome, I've been loving the feedback always so positive and respectful, I'll always be inspired to write a new poem, and have yourself a great new year also! :)
Date: 12/24/2014 4:02:00 AM
Fire! Dude your style is nice!
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Date: 12/31/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank you man!
Date: 12/23/2014 7:00:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup,Trent !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome to P - Soup, Anne - Lise, This shall be an interesting and fun new community to be apart of! :) And have a wonderful holidays to you too!

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