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thoughts wander in the mind like wild horses they prance and gallop with flowing manes till worn out they seek rest ___________________ 12th October 2015 Contest: Ninette Sponsor: Silent One Placed 3rd

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/25/2015 10:25:00 AM

I love this Paul,a very super work, the argument it generated is also another icing sugar on this cake: is mane or manes one sylable word? I love Andrea contribution here , I also appreciate your coolness and S 1 maturity,this is the more why your site is always a must read for me. Long life to you Paul that we continuing to drink from your fountain of wisdom...hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 11/25/2015 1:08:00 PM

Hi Kayode! I see that you not only read poetry, but also the comments that are listed below. Yes, we had a lovely friendly 'debate' that shows how things can be ironed out civilly without outbursts of indignation:))) I must thank you, profoundly, for all your lovely and complimentary comments, together with encouraging support. God bless & regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 5:21:00 PM

Yayyyy, you got a great placement, Paul. Just as you deserved!! Congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2015 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Andrea:))) You rock!!! ~ Goodnight:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 9:15:00 AM

ok, I could not let this go, so I went to check it out. Two different counters said two but I found one that said "one" Then I typed in a dictionary the word Manes: If it is pronounced MA/NES, that refers to a different word!! that word means (in Roman mythology) the deified souls of dead ancestors. Normally horse's mane is a noncount word not traditionally pluralized but since you used plural horses with manes, it is OK to do it. I just checked that as well! will talk to Silent One about it.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Andrea; you make a great advocate for human rights:)) As you can see from the above comment, your intercession has been fruitful. You are not only a fair player, but also a friend to be treasured:) /x/ paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2015 9:29:00 AM

I know what you mean (I studied Latin). "Manes" are the spirits of the dead. In Latin it is pronounced differently, thus having 2 syllables (ma-nes). I did not know you could find this word in an English dictionary. I will go check my English dictionaries, out of curiosity!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 9:08:00 AM

this is really nice, Paul. Glad I am finally seeing it down here. What are you talking about manes having two syllables down here, Paul??? It is ONE syllable. Your lines are perfect for syllable count!! OMG. I just read what Silent One said to you. I gotta tell him NOT to use that syllable counter. Don't second guess yourself. Some of the syllable counters are wrong wrong wrong!!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2015 9:59:00 AM

Hi Andrea....I checked "manes" on howmanysyllables.com, and I have a feeling that they are referring to the Latin word. I have asked them to clarify; waiting for a reply. ~~ [The word ma-nes from the Latin is listed in all my English dictionaries.]

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/15/2015 2:51:00 PM

Hi Paul: Great ninette on horses. beautifully done! My compliments.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 3:44:00 PM

Thank you for enjoying my wild horses, Ralph! ~ All the best. // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/15/2015 2:07:00 PM

I like this, the way you compared thoughts with horses, Paul. Sad that you didn't place. hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 2:13:00 PM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Kim. No problem about not placing:) I admire sponsors who stick to the rules. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/15/2015 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations Paul, I didn't know there was a contest but I'm glad you won with this gem, he chose the right horse!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Richard. I suppose I did choose the right horses, but I chose the wrong 'manes':) ...thus...n/a for me! // paul [pls see Silent One's comment further down.]

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/15/2015 3:12:00 AM

I didn't have a clue that manes has two syllables. I guess I will have to make sure I check every word if entering one of these. I didn't have time to enter this contest. I liked your entry very much Paul. The thought of horses galloping free like our thoughts is very appealing. #7

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2015 2:36:00 PM

Hi Connie! I thought that's it's only fair that I let you know that Silent One has put me on the winners' list. Pls see the exchange of comments further up the page. :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 1:55:00 PM

It's a relief to know that I'm not the only one to have been taken in by the word 'manes':) Maybe I should have used it in the singular! Thank you for your feedback, Connie. Mahalo nui loa! // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/14/2015 7:08:00 PM

So right on! Great telling of a human truth. I don't know where you placed, but I know I like it ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you CayCay; unfortunately I did not place; I was naughty and broke one of the rules:) Pls see Silent One's comment below. ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 10/14/2015 4:52:00 PM

Paul, this is lovely, I adore horses so I find the words beautiful, a flowing 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, creeping tendrils ~~

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:58:00 PM

I am glad you found this to your liking, Constance. Thank you for stopping by with lovely comments and high rating. ~ Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/14/2015 6:47:00 AM

Excellent and thoughtful metaphor. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting so positively, Ravi. Pleased that you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/13/2015 5:42:00 AM

This is an awesome entry Paul, wishing you the best for the contest :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2015 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Wilma. I have just found out from the above comment that it failed to make the final list, but that's no problem...a new poem was born:) ~ regards // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/13/2015 2:30:00 AM

What a great analogy, Paul. I can identify with your poem's image so much, especially right now at 3:27 am, wide awake with prancing and galloping wild horses keeping me up! All the best for the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2015 4:48:00 PM

Hi Sandra! I' afraid that my energetic horses have scared the sheep away:) Hope you managed to fall asleep in the end...and perhaps slept in, later than usual! Thank you for a lovely visit. All the best. // paul

Mark Woods

Date: 10/12/2015 11:59:00 PM

Very clever and so so true.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thank you, Mark. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/12/2015 7:55:00 PM

Loved this, made me think, when I have so many thoughts wish I had a pen at hand! Loved this!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2015 1:21:00 PM

Yes, some thoughts are worth recording, that's when paper and pen come in handy; but there are others that are best left to drift into oblivion! Thank you for reading! // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/12/2015 7:38:00 PM

wonderful! you've done a masterful job with this format. good luck in the contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Ilene. Glad that you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane

Date: 10/12/2015 5:12:00 PM

Being a horse lover, I was drawn to this one. Well done, Paul. ~ Lin ~

Paul Callus
Date: 10/12/2015 5:23:00 PM

I love horses, too, Lin:) Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. ~ Regards // paul