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Those Eyes, Break of a Day

To me, yea, Iris is all alighting The scent of yours all pervading, Behold your face chastised When I close my eyes. Can’t see you in flesh and blood But I can paint you in words. You are Wordsworth’s daffodils Membrane of the eyes reeled. The eyes give light at the dawn The light that misleads the morn. The eyes green, sexy and deep Deeper than the depth to peep. Genus Iris, sword-shaped leaves Displaying rainbow colors to relive. I feel March in your swirling dart September in your pearly heart. I see a heart full of love, With the gentleness of a dove, You be a window flower freeze I am your summer breeze.
+++++++ April 3, 2014 Form: Couplets 10x2 Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: "If" by seren Roberts

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Date: 4/23/2014 11:00:00 PM
Dr. Ram Such a sweet and charming write. Congrats on the win. Thank your for the nice comment on my No Exit poem.
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:14:00 PM
HI DR., , Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you:). ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/6/2014 12:45:00 PM
Great imagery, Dr. Ram. Congrats for your win with this sweet poem.
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Date: 4/6/2014 12:06:00 PM
What a beauty "Wordsworth daffodils" (I loved that reference!!) Well done, Dr. Ram!!
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. enjoyed a most lovely write. // paul
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Date: 4/6/2014 7:48:00 AM
Awesome write...and congrats on your deserved win!!!!
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Date: 4/6/2014 4:14:00 AM
Well done Dr. Ram... Verlena
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Date: 4/6/2014 2:24:00 AM
tremendously beautiful! Big congrats on your accolades!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 11:57:00 PM
This is extremely amazing! Congratulations on your well-deserved great win my dear friend Dr. Ram. I like your poem so much! Thank u so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/5/2014 7:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Ram, many thanks for taking part ....Seren
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/5/2014 9:36:00 PM
Thanks for my placement, seren

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