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Those Boards At Number 7 (2006-2009)

Gone, all gone, Are these, those things. That I took ownership, Lay with love and hope. My bricks and windows. Those 'men' of the board, They lay their wood, and said: ''No more''. Property of mine, Each crumb made, warmly placed. Each smudge of cement. Each crevice; A thought, moment,dream. Destroyed, broken. One single blow. Oops a daisy, All gone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/25/2009 3:06:00 PM
perhaps add wood covered windows to line 5, Hugs!
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Date: 6/22/2009 4:24:00 PM
* can tell i had holidays on my mind, how have i put 'that' for 'they' each time?? Its so dumb its clever!! :-)
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:09:00 PM
you didn't need it anyway? are you ok? jim
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Date: 6/14/2009 12:23:00 AM
Full of pathos Naomi.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poeting today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/13/2009 1:42:00 AM
Yep that knocked it down good and proper! That had tried to illegally blow it up in order to not have to pay me off to leave!!!! Crazy hey!!!
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Date: 6/12/2009 5:39:00 PM
Okies my Naomi did your home get plowed down. Or is this more like a metaphor for life in general..soup me. The poem refers to no boards? Light & Love
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Date: 6/12/2009 4:24:00 PM
Soup mail BG
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Date: 6/12/2009 3:03:00 PM
Nice write Naomi, I left you some soup mail...Raul
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