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Thorns

I thought I was over you I have a love new but you waltz back into my life again Asking how I am Your still beautiful is a rose all my weaknesses you know Your touch sways me to sin I wish I could hate you more hate you forever as I swore But your embrace reveals who I am I am that fool so in love with you who threw away his life all for you I love you so much so much I could die even the beauty of a rose cannot hide The thorns that pierce and breaks my heart Haunted memories of our past love going crazy for your love Tormented and falling apart Don't kiss me as before Don't reopen my hearts door For now I love someone new Her love may not be All I desire or need But her love saved me from you Please go away for good I loved you once all I could Our past love still torments me It is over let us be Pull away your thorns that rip my heart Pull out those thorns so razor sharp Your my rose I forever close in the recesses of my memory

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Date: 1/10/2020 2:07:00 PM
Hello Fritz Purdum, oh -I see you loved her with all your heart. Now you found someone else to love. Perhaps this person is better for you. When in love and a break up occurs it is hard to get over the parting. Best to heal first then find another love. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2020 7:02:00 PM
Hello Fritz, yes it good to write about everything. Thank you for the lovely comment. You did very well. have a nice evening my friend.
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Fritz Purdum
Date: 1/11/2020 4:13:00 AM
Thank you, I just write a little about everything, not necessarily personal. Appreciate you